Skip to content
New issue

Have a question about this project? Sign up for a free GitHub account to open an issue and contact its maintainers and the community.

Sign up for GitHub

By clicking “Sign up for GitHub”, you agree to our terms of service and privacy statement. We’ll occasionally send you account related emails.

Already on GitHub? Sign in to your account

Jump to bottom

zh-cn: update the translation of the 'performance' #23520

Merged
merged 14 commits into from
Sep 18, 2024
Merged

zh-cn: update the translation of the 'performance' #23520

merged 14 commits into from
Sep 18, 2024

Conversation

familyboat
Copy link
Contributor

Description

Motivation

Additional details

Related issues and pull requests

@familyboat familyboat requested a review from a team as a code owner September 12, 2024 11:19
@familyboat familyboat requested review from yin1999 and removed request for a team September 12, 2024 11:19
@github-actions github-actions bot added the l10n-zh Issues related to Chinese content. label Sep 12, 2024
@github-actions GitHub Actions
Copy link
Contributor

github-actions bot commented Sep 12, 2024 •
edited
Loading

Preview URLs

Flaws (17)

URL: /zh-CN/docs/Learn/Performance
Title: Web 性能
Flaw count: 17

  • macros:
    • /zh-CN/docs/Learn/Tools_and_testing/Client-side_JavaScript_frameworks/React_interactivity_events_state does not exist but fell back to /en-US/docs/Learn/Tools_and_testing/Client-side_JavaScript_frameworks/React_interactivity_events_state
    • /zh-CN/docs/Learn/Tools_and_testing/Client-side_JavaScript_frameworks/React_interactivity_filtering_conditional_rendering does not exist but fell back to /en-US/docs/Learn/Tools_and_testing/Client-side_JavaScript_frameworks/React_interactivity_filtering_conditional_rendering
    • /zh-CN/docs/Learn/Tools_and_testing/Client-side_JavaScript_frameworks/React_accessibility does not exist but fell back to /en-US/docs/Learn/Tools_and_testing/Client-side_JavaScript_frameworks/React_accessibility
    • /zh-CN/docs/Learn/Tools_and_testing/Client-side_JavaScript_frameworks/React_resources does not exist but fell back to /en-US/docs/Learn/Tools_and_testing/Client-side_JavaScript_frameworks/React_resources
    • /zh-CN/docs/Learn/Tools_and_testing/Client-side_JavaScript_frameworks/Ember_getting_started does not exist but fell back to /en-US/docs/Learn/Tools_and_testing/Client-side_JavaScript_frameworks/Ember_getting_started
    • and 10 more flaws omitted
  • broken_links:
    • Can't resolve /zh-CN/docs/Learn/Performance/Fonts
    • Can't resolve /zh-CN/docs/Learn/Performance/Mobile

(comment last updated: 2024-09-18 04:12:17)

@familyboat @github-actions
Update files/zh-cn/learn/performance/index.md
9a81546 
Co-authored-by: github-actions[bot] <41898282+github-actions[bot]@users.noreply.github.com>
yin1999
yin1999 reviewed Sep 15, 2024
View reviewed changes
Copy link
Member

@yin1999 yin1999 left a comment

Choose a reason for hiding this comment

The reason will be displayed to describe this comment to others. Learn more.

#23559 (comment) 这里的有些点可以直接包含进来，避免多次修改

@familyboat
Copy link
Contributor Author

修改了遗漏的两处。
重新表述一下我对本文和本模块的看法，我认为这两个词指代的就是当前文章时，是可以用这两个词的，而指代的是另一篇文章时就会换成这篇文章和这个模块这样的表述。
我记得你之前也有表述过类似的想法。

yin1999
yin1999 reviewed Sep 18, 2024
View reviewed changes
files/zh-cn/learn/performance/index.md Outdated Show resolved Hide resolved
files/zh-cn/learn/performance/index.md Outdated Show resolved Hide resolved
files/zh-cn/learn/performance/index.md Outdated Show resolved Hide resolved
files/zh-cn/learn/performance/index.md Outdated Show resolved Hide resolved
files/zh-cn/learn/performance/index.md Outdated Show resolved Hide resolved
files/zh-cn/learn/performance/index.md Outdated Show resolved Hide resolved
files/zh-cn/learn/performance/index.md Outdated Show resolved Hide resolved
files/zh-cn/learn/performance/index.md Outdated Show resolved Hide resolved
files/zh-cn/learn/performance/index.md Outdated Show resolved Hide resolved
familyboat and others added 9 commits September 18, 2024 11:10
@familyboat @yin1999
Update files/zh-cn/learn/performance/index.md
3bc57e3 
Co-authored-by: A1lo <[email protected]>
@familyboat @yin1999
Update files/zh-cn/learn/performance/index.md
b4d1b17 
Co-authored-by: A1lo <[email protected]>
@familyboat @yin1999
Update files/zh-cn/learn/performance/index.md
5c5213d 
Co-authored-by: A1lo <[email protected]>
@familyboat @yin1999
Update files/zh-cn/learn/performance/index.md
615d1cb 
Co-authored-by: A1lo <[email protected]>
@familyboat @yin1999
Update files/zh-cn/learn/performance/index.md
cf18ed8 
Co-authored-by: A1lo <[email protected]>
@familyboat @yin1999
Update files/zh-cn/learn/performance/index.md
9bcf2f7 
Co-authored-by: A1lo <[email protected]>
@familyboat @yin1999
Update files/zh-cn/learn/performance/index.md
9ad9846 
Co-authored-by: A1lo <[email protected]>
@familyboat
将标题改为原来的翻译，名词性的表达更符合标题这个角色；
0caf84e 
不采用‘既然’这个词的话，还是需要一个词来表达因果或递进关系；
Web 性能的商业案例 换成原来的翻译，将 本文 改为 这篇文章
@familyboat
调整一些表达让语句更通顺
3045ba1
@yin1999 yin1999 merged commit 1900d03 into mdn:main Sep 18, 2024
7 checks passed
@familyboat familyboat deleted the update_Learn_Performance branch September 18, 2024 09:12
sora32127 pushed a commit to sora32127/translated-content that referenced this pull request Oct 6, 2024
@familyboat @yin1999 @sora32127
zh-cn: update the translation of the 'performance' (mdn#23520)
fed104f 
Co-authored-by: A1lo <[email protected]>
Sign up for free to join this conversation on GitHub. Already have an account? Sign in to comment
Reviewers

@github-actions github-actions[bot] github-actions[bot] left review comments

@yin1999 yin1999 yin1999 approved these changes

Assignees
No one assigned
Labels
l10n-zh Issues related to Chinese content.
Projects
MDN translated-content l10n-zh
Status: Done
Milestone
No milestone
Development

Successfully merging this pull request may close these issues.
2 participants
@familyboat @yin1999